I really liked this. You did a good job of catching interest at the start and maintaining it, I empathised with Meg, felt like I was there with her and the ending was happier than I expected (in a pleasant way)
Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. I was especially hoping to hear from female readers. It was a delicate job having Meg use this strategy, as I didn’t want it to seem like the recommendation was to kiss someone’s ass when they're behaving badly, it’s more about empowering her with a tool to diffuse a bad situation and to take some control of it. I hope that’s what comes across•
I devoured it with the greatest pleasure. This deserves more attention!! You really know how to set the scene, raise the stakes, and bring a satisfying resolution. I can’t wait to read more of your work.
It was so nice of you leave such a lovely comment! I've been writing in a vacuum for so long, it's exciting to finally get some eyes on my work. Here's to us both growing our readership•
I like the melancholy tone in your writing, great work👌
Thank you for reading and commenting! It's much appreciated•
I really liked this. You did a good job of catching interest at the start and maintaining it, I empathised with Meg, felt like I was there with her and the ending was happier than I expected (in a pleasant way)
Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. I was especially hoping to hear from female readers. It was a delicate job having Meg use this strategy, as I didn’t want it to seem like the recommendation was to kiss someone’s ass when they're behaving badly, it’s more about empowering her with a tool to diffuse a bad situation and to take some control of it. I hope that’s what comes across•
I devoured it with the greatest pleasure. This deserves more attention!! You really know how to set the scene, raise the stakes, and bring a satisfying resolution. I can’t wait to read more of your work.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! Very kind of you to say•
Getting to the heart of the problem--it's almost always an external factor. 👏
It was so nice of you leave such a lovely comment! I've been writing in a vacuum for so long, it's exciting to finally get some eyes on my work. Here's to us both growing our readership•