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Keith Long's avatar

Very good stuff

Jil's avatar
Nov 27Edited

Wow. That was intense. Such good writing. I think anyone who grew up in a dysfunctional family can feel this in their bones. Well done!

Layne Mercer's avatar

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment•

Joan Spilman's avatar

Riveting!

Layne Mercer's avatar

Thanks for reading and for the nice comment!